Atrium Poem by Tara Chettur

Atrium

Rating: 5.0


The life is an atrium
The central hall is the soul
There are so many doors
We are opening one and shutting down others
The hall needs ventilation
Why don’t we then open all the doors?
Let everything come things we fear and
The things we like …
Let us not be afraid
We are here to break the doors even though if it’s rusted
Let us live life to the fullest without any fear!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 February 2010

the flow is good. the thought is nave. mark 10 shan

0 0 Reply
Mayur Soni 12 December 2009

its not good to open all the doors better we shud have all the windows open to check what coming our way.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success