Athletic Endeavor Poem by Mary Havran

Athletic Endeavor

Rating: 4.1


Once more it begins
My mind focused
On the task
at hand
Ready?

Muscles tightening
The gathering up
of Both mind
And body
Go!

With every ounce
Of strength and
Determination
I make the
Charge

The obstacle looms
Yet the distance
Shortens while
I push on
Steadily

Uncertainty dawns
As I draw nearer
This hurdle
In my
path

Now the moment
Final effort is
Demanded
I give my
All

No!
Failure!
All was not
Enough to leap
The dreaded hurdle

Exhausted I subside
Exhaling in defeat
Coming to a rest
Wheels against
The Curb

Dedicate to all those who daily challenge such 'hurdles'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fredi Staire 05 February 2008

People should work to make things more accessible. Thanks for writing of it.

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David Harris 07 February 2008

Mary, no matter how defeated you feel about such hurdles and I know quite a number of people in predicaments such as these. No one is a failure as long as they try. Another brilliant poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Roger Cornish 16 February 2008

Always... always br-ea-th-le-ss wh-en re-ad-in-g Ma-ry's Po-et-ry... Sh-'s ju-st do-es th-at to me! *Grabs rail for support* Rogerx

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Mable Wumblie 14 February 2008

I was picturing an athlete right up to the last part, but then there are many types of heroism.

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Emancipation Planz 13 February 2008

Excuse (and thank you for) the plagarism due to the exhaustion of mental exercise.... love/hate; love/hate this! ! ! !

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What Angie said. And.... admiration. t x

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To Windward 10 February 2008

Mary, I love this.... it had me willing you on to the last. I wonder if I might reproduce this in our local MS Newsletter, would this be OK with you? Rob

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