At War Poem by Janelle Morehart

At War

Rating: 1.5


Forever at War
At home, In school
I battle myself everyday
I fight to hide my feelings
I fight to stay alive
I fight for those who cannot
I fight the darkness that threatens to control me
I fight against those who cause pain
I fight for a sense of freedom
I fight for virtue
I fight for friendship and love
I fight and I fight
You may ask why?
I fight so that i may stay alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 15 October 2008

Try not to be so hard on yourself Janelle. However, Brian Dorn is right to call the poem excellent. Best wishes, Jerry

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Brian Dorn 13 October 2006

Life is a constant struggle... fight the good fight! Excellent write, Janelle! ! Brian

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