At Times Poem by Somanathan Iyer

At Times

Rating: 5.0


At times I am sane
treating life as a bane
welcoming end as a boon

At times I am lost
Brooding over lapses of past
And future looming fraught

At times I feel shy
With nothing in favor to vie
Hopes proving pie in the sky

At times I gather courage
Ignoring problems as mirage
Confidence scoring a message

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 23 June 2013

A nicely crafted poem, rhyming beautifully! Everything depends on how we look at life!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 June 2013

Wonderful poem. Each of the feelings is simply natural and finally you gather courage to gain confidence. Please read my poem 'One Brick at a Time' when you have time - it complements your poem. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

We all experience periods of pessimism and optimism, or ups and downs. Well expressed here Somanathan.

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Wahab Abdul 17 June 2013

written on decently on modern theme and the craft of the poem is high.. i like it..

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