At The River's Edge Poem by Valerie Dohren

Unique are the thoughts expressed and superb is the rendering here. The intriguing life entwined with time lands us in this land of turmoil and you are luckily at the edge of the river that can soothe your mind as well.

Very lovely poem of longing for connection, the visual fascination of impossible ripples, the shock of icy water waking up the senses, immersion into something bigger than ourselves (the habitat of Poseidon) and all fantasy... What a lovely image! With the awareness of the soul's existence, and parallel paths leading us back to Eden though this poem seems to me an expression of the ultimate longing, a reunification with God's Love...

I am falling, falling, falling Further into time long past Touching ancient worlds of wonder Where all memories are cast The stanza i liked most n all above an interesting write.

awesome write my friend

your work is truly mindblowing as always, , , , , great write again, ,

Your thoughts flow far beyond the river's edge, like in a deep dream you take us with you

I could feel this poem with all of my skin dear Valerie! It feels like one of those moments of connection where space and time become limitless. The connection to a river may teach so many things, if only for a while we can keep still falling into a silent reverie! Thank you for share, always a pleasure to read your poems!

A big yes from start to finish. The rhyme and rhythm is faultless, and definitely a keeper. Lovely poem Val.

The poem is sublime, as was, we suppose, Eden. Excellent Val - very thought provoking.

Life beyond life! Reunion thru death.Very nice theme Val.I'm your fan, you know.