At The End Of Walkway Poem by Fatima Nusairat

At The End Of Walkway

Rating: 5.0


It's a pity not to pay attention
Of this darkness:
Here, 'Jasmine' drink the tears;
Did you smell sobbing perfume..? !
,
Here continues to grow thorns
And there are barefooted on the road..;
Did you loose your plow..? !
,
At the end of walkway..
Fates in wait
And there is a lot of oblations prepared..;
Did you prepare your oblation..? !
,
At your feet your bad luck
Will fall
The blast, which raises is a half-truth
So did you hear the sound of your heart..? !
,
In the groan of children..
Something that sends terror
There is Tombstones on this rubble;
Did you hear the dirt weep!
,
Glimmer of lights that flash at night..
Point to 'Carnival'.. fires;
Did you remember when the war begin..? !
;
It's a pity not to pay attention,
It's pity not to see all these details! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Nusairat 21 May 2014

Thank you Loyd, appreciated :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 May 2014

Hello Fatimah. You write with such passion of soul, a nice read, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Utsav Patel 06 November 2013

You have great potential.. Wow this is so powerful write. Those last lines.. Lights that flash the night.. Brilliant! It just reminds my poem will o' the wisp :)

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