At The Beach Recalling Love Poem by Guess Who

At The Beach Recalling Love

Rating: 5.0


Blue everywhere no limit for it
A boundary so beautiful to look at
Sand mixes with water in harmony
Sun sets down taking away all tragedy
Looking at the scene sitting down all alone
For my special love has even gone
As for I try to remember our best times
instead of recalling my unconscious crimes
The birds flying in troops
People leave in groups
Darkness fills the space
I am alone left with so much disgrace
Hit by the collateral attacks
Which damaged me the max
From the one beloved
I still love and will love and loved
So come back to me sweety

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkangel Flyfree 03 July 2012

Wow very creative and imaginable! I like it! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 01 July 2012

Very sweet to end that way, recalling at the beach hoping the freshness of the sea revives the memories can be a nice thing to wish...We cant create life in love, the broken one is able to fix but can it function well again? but there always a chance to recover from all circumstances..we may revive the things happened but we can give a life to it..Just hope and moving to new episode is need to be in mind too...a nice poem again Guess Who_Unwritten Soul

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Wabi Sabi 30 June 2012

it is an imaginablly readable poem. I like poems like this making poeple think of what is going on and what it is like there.

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