At Present Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

At Present



It is peaceful mind
That remains kind
To keep body
In tune with harmony

You my find people
Restless and always in trouble
Over unsuccessful result
Despite an honest attempt

It is not digested easily
Many reasons are forwarded readily
It fails to console inner unrest
Despite trying level best

Internal weakness affects so much
It has never stopping crunch
Desire after desire pile
Mind desperately move in for a while

Let us try to be stable
To avoid further troubles
Self contentment may help to great extent
This move is welcome at present

Wednesday, July 30, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2014

t is peaceful mind That remains kind To keep body In tune with harmony

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Amazing! Avery Hopes8 minutes ago The style, the message, the rhyme scheme. Everything was perfect. Real talk Comment +1

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Good Adam Latham7 minutes ago I really enjoyed reading this piece...it is so true, it is a peaceful mind that remains kind.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 July 2014

we should be bold enough to bear all, good writing.

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It is peaceful mind That remains kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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