At First Sight Poem by ben siemsen

At First Sight



there she was waitin
for someone who
just got back from
an unknown
place that sees
lonlyness to shreadded tears
which cant be perished

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Honest Heart 08 April 2009

Heartfelt expressions.............................................keeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing man........ :)

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, aryaindia 27 July 2008

Your poetry lines are simple but very meaningful in content and outlook. Please keep writing for you shall shine beyond the facade of tommorrows....arya

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Alex Rios 04 June 2008

Wow, very intense. Is this about your life. Very good. Keep up the good work! ! -Panda

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