A nicely written sweet little poem. Not sure if it's because I made note of the poets age but for some reason I equate this piece with young love as opposed to say an older couple having been together for years. All in all still a nice heartfelt poem.
this poem is both sweet and sour. As one makes an assumption that the partner feels the same, it would really hurt if the partner does not share the same feeling.
As one centres their life on their partner, when you wake up one day and they are gone, then your whole world just crambles...............................
4 sentences,4 stanzas,4 lines in each stanza... and nothing. just kidding. the last line was my favorite. not to walk on a beach, but to step on it. and i see how many couples are lost in material gain (it is true you can buy love) but the kind that you cant is the same that you can step or walk or talk or not, and still have such a love as to understand each other and love at days end.