Daniel Warner

Rookie - 27 Points (8-4-95- -Y2K / Fresno, CA)

At Day's End - Poem by Daniel Warner

At day's end, I have no other thought,
but to see you, and no other
that, is the dream I have always sought,
and for you to always be my lover.

At day's end, it's your voice I hear,
its the one that calls calm and quiet,
almost like your so near
even though I can't even buy it.

At day's end, I yearn for your touch
as I hope you do too
that is why I love you so much
because, I know you do too.

At day's end, you wait for me there
down by the shore, so we can talk,
as I run my fingers through your hair,
we step on the beach just to walk.


Comments about At Day's End by Daniel Warner

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (5/17/2014 9:09:00 PM)

    A nicely written sweet little poem. Not sure if it's because I made note of the poets age but for some reason I equate this piece with young love as opposed to say an older couple having been together for years. All in all still a nice heartfelt poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,002 Points Leslie Philibert (5/17/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    Nice old-fashioned romantic, like it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (5/17/2014 1:16:00 AM)

    Lovely poem! Well done x (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,990 Points Babatunde Aremu (5/17/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    A nice poem laid with affection. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Negro Dommis (5/17/2012 6:52:00 PM)

    Hey, take a look at this guys band on facebook
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  • Rookie Hellen Mafupa (5/17/2012 10:31:00 AM)

    this poem is both sweet and sour. As one makes an assumption that the partner feels the same, it would really hurt if the partner does not share the same feeling.
    As one centres their life on their partner, when you wake up one day and they are gone, then your whole world just crambles............................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deci Hernandez (5/17/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    4 sentences,4 stanzas,4 lines in each stanza... and nothing. just kidding. the last line was my favorite. not to walk on a beach, but to step on it. and i see how many couples are lost in material gain (it is true you can buy love) but the kind that you cant is the same that you can step or walk or talk or not, and still have such a love as to understand each other and love at days end. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012



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