At An Old Temple Poem by wabi sabi

At An Old Temple



Meditation on a hot summer day.
Big clouds roll by.
A breeze comes in my mind.
I am inspired.

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 March 2016

I admire the depth and the simplicity of your poetry!

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Shirin Sheikhi 28 March 2012

As if waiting was endless My soul intolerably restless Disillusioned with greatness Levitating to peacefulness Left for somewhere else Where world's affinity less Replete with loneliness Maybe even wilderness Cuddled by complete quietness Meditation in Superior Kindness No death no life no possessiveness hope soon i can experience great feeling of meditation in a Japanese temple thanks for sharing +10

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 05 March 2012

simple but get a feeling of praying at a temple.jk

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Pheko Motaung 22 February 2012

A marvelously well written little masterpiece! You're a true artist!

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