At A Locksmith's Poem by Shahzia Batool

At A Locksmith's

Rating: 4.1


Excuse me Sir!
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys
in perfect ease.
Now prove your worth
and pray tell me,
if there 's any master key
by which one can unlock the door-
of iron hearts...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yaseen Anwer 11 March 2013

MashaAllah....Very good!

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 April 2012

Beauty, passion, innovation, momentum-materials of a woman what lacks a rusted metal locksmith.The virtues are enough to smelt, melt iron hearts when determined otherwise wait coz iron to rusts with the time carbon.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 May 2012

we may use a magnetic to draw them if not unlock!

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

Very clever. Skillfully written Shahzia. Love it.

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Captain Cur 01 June 2012

Very rich concise poem about our human condition. Just the right amount of words and imagery to get the point across.

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Ramesh Rai 31 July 2013

The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life. regards

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Chandana Khan 25 July 2013

one of my best for its compactness.10 marks

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Passionate Reader 30 June 2013

it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,

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R.j. Wynn 23 May 2013

Very thought provoking and intriguing.

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