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At a Locksmith's

Excuse me Sir!
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys
in perfect ease.
Now prove your worth
and pray tell me,
if there 's any master key
by which one can unlock the door-
of iron hearts...

Submitted: Sunday, December 18, 2011


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  • Ramesh Rai (7/31/2013 4:55:00 AM)

    The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life.
    regards

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  • Chandana Khan (7/25/2013 12:20:00 AM)

    one of my best for its compactness.10 marks

  • Passionate Reader (6/30/2013 5:58:00 PM)

    it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !

  • Heather Wilkins (6/26/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,

  • Bobby Wynn (5/23/2013 6:30:00 PM)

    Very thought provoking and intriguing.

  • Yasmeen Khan (4/16/2013 5:29:00 AM)

    short, straightforward and at the same time offers wealth of meaning...I've read an adage somewhere:
    'kind words unlock the iron door'...but some doors are really rusty. A lovely poem!

  • Yaseen Anwer (3/11/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    MashaAllah....Very good!

  • Sun Shine (1/25/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    kia baat hey, nehayat khubsoorat!

  • Sun Shine (1/25/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    OMG! from where you've got the idea!
    :)
    lovely!

  • * Sunprincess * (1/10/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    awesome write..the last line really got my attention..fabulous!

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