At A Glance Poem by wendell lack jr.

At A Glance

Rating: 4.5


to the woman i can not loose
the one that said she'd be my muse
she says im strong
i say she's wrong
i spend my weeks in timeout
untill the weekend i wanna shout
for when we are together
there is nothing better
i see her smile and her dimple
then its sends this amazing ripple
i know she's happy and appeased
oh God dont take from me please
i do not know where i'll go without her
but know where to go with her
for in her eyes there lies heaven
the most saught after haven

Monday, June 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confirmation,confusion,fears,first love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i haven't been to school in some time and dont remember the difference in forms so bear with me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 15 July 2015

Love is a beautiful thing my friend and you talk about it well. Stay blessed

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2015

A lovely romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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