Midnights Voice

Veteran Poet - 1,144 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Asking Forgiveness


I reach out... sadlessly
I preach out... incessantly
When time comes asking who?
and what you are, catch you gasping

I took the answer book
Maybe eleven years of age
Put it in my desk
Forgot it in all it's page

Then the squirrel I shot
With my B-B gun through it's ears
It fell dead and in my regret
Flooded into a sea of tears

Life and death swirls around me
My eyes leaving me with no surprise
Tomorrow is heaped upon me
All yesterdays materalized

The answer book was found
I pleaded guilty without a sound
Tried, convicted, sentenced
When there was no crime

To no crime I was winched

I burried the squirrel
Said a prayer asking forgiveness
For all of my wicked sins
That life is so sacred without some

Kind of repentiveness I would never
be allowed to win
Jesus came to me saying,
'It's all right I forgive you of your sins'

Even then under forgiveness
I felt little of a relief
God said to me,
'My son has spoken, it is one of belief

I see the squirrel sitting in that tree
One moment alive, breathing, free
My choice to make, my grace to be
I pulled the trigger forever changing me

I reach out... endlessly
I preach out... repentively
When time comes asking who?
Then I know what I am

Submitted: Sunday, May 05, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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  • Rookie Patricia Northall (3/8/2014 12:33:00 PM)

    I understand completely, when you are searching for forgiveness, but it never happens
    completely, especially when the wrong you feel so badly, the victim of your wrong doing
    is no longer there to say sorry to. It's not easy to move on, always there on your conscience.
    You describe it so well. Beautifully phrased.
    Pat Northall (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Laurie X3 (9/7/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    Some things seem the way of it so we follow and do as those have done before, only to find it never leaves our heart and mind. Many so the same without any affect. Embrace the heart that cherishes even the smallest innocent life... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,236 Points Noreen Carden (9/4/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    Hi Midnight I think sometimes we find it hard to forgive ourselves
    I enjoyed reading your poem well done (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,236 Points Noreen Carden (9/4/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    Hi Midnight a very honest poem i think sometimes we as humans find it hard to forgive ourselves
    I enjoyed reading this well done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    A great poem of guilt and repentance and We can ask forgiveness only from God..Beautifully expressed, each and every line well written. Good poem indeed...Loved reading it..

    I seek your Blessings on my completion of 100 poems..Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,668 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/20/2013 3:22:00 PM)

    Deeply moving. Pull of a trigger changes everything. Poem serves as a caution for future. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (6/13/2013 9:58:00 PM)

    Always look on the bright side you might have saved it from being road kill, that being said, boys do horrible stupid things, it takes a good one to learn from the mistake and become a good man. Good use of the opening reworked for the closing, the fact that repentance still lingers means that Buddy jesus didn't get nailed for nothing. Harrowing but great read (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,465 Points Lyn Paul (6/6/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    complete sadness in these words holding regret, We all have some form of forgiveness that we think we should ask. Yet the goodness of our souls must be counted and compared to simple regrets of carelessness. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (6/4/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    this is yrs really a unique poem... i relish it while i read... tfs (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/1/2013 7:01:00 PM)

    what else can we do but ask for forgiveness. God is always willing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/28/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    indeed a poem of guilt & repentance and above all have great truth that God only have power to forgive someone whole heartily...poem is brave in nature, to define the state which going on in your mind every time unintentionally, is a job of brave confessional mind...amazing (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (5/23/2013 8:25:00 PM)

    Amazing! Your choice of words and the theme of forgiveness have mesmerizing effect on the readers' mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (5/19/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    marvelous.really impressed me and absorbed all my attention to think who i am.do we really have to ask for the forgiveness for our sins which by chance have been done..!
    undoubtedly asking for forgiveness brings out happiness but we must out ourselves in the position of God to find what the real sin is..
    great work Thomas.10+++~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (5/16/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    it's the development of the soul of this artist (in Joyce' context) not only about forgiveness...but the thread is complete: Sin, Repentance, Forgiveness! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Jahan Zeb (5/14/2013 9:50:00 AM)

    \wonderful imagery sir. I loved reading it. references are amazing and your lines compel readers to think over and over. Appears to be simple but I don't think it that simple a poem. Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,935 Points Ken E Hall (5/14/2013 3:03:00 AM)

    Youngness shouts out for the fact of an act regretted and only age in passing years will forgive a clever poem with 'Then I know who I am, ...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (5/14/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    what we all seek unfortunately most unable to find as their definition due to the though of weakness or some sort, to forgive one is to forgive yourself thats one of the choices gifted to us, if remorse is felt and redemption is seeked forgiveness is found, an excellent write nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (5/11/2013 10:15:00 PM)

    how does it happen cyclically, when one chooses to forgive? Forgive someone whole hearledly is the highest state of Godly consciousness..Nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (5/9/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    A lovely profound poem of forgiveness. Have a look at my What Love its a bit similar in a forgiving way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (5/8/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    like always your piece made me speechless.....brilliant i am in awe (Report) Reply

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