Asking Poem by Deborah Cromer
Asking
Without warning
There came a time
When all was shattered
By the righteousness of rhyme
Being careful, by what I ask
Faces revealed from under the mask
True pictures of what was lost
Friendship and trust pays cost
I asked you, I asked you
Please tell me, answer me true
I have no pain with her
You with honesty and truth, not pure
Selfish you are, not nice
Hurtful and dangerous as black ice
Your direction towards evil does pull
Be careful, be careful, be careful
I like how this flowed and the truth to it. You always have to watch your back. Thanks for sharing.
seems about a sweet taker guy.. let be. this is good though.
Selfish you are, not nice Hurtful and dangerous as black ice Your direction towards evil does pull Be careful, be careful, be careful...... yees it is naked truth and one must be prrepared for it....10 read mine i m disgrace... cry not...
A wonderful piece of work Deborah, I loved the repeats in the last line that serve to bind the work together. Best wishes, Andrew
Deborah: Very well written and the rythem is great. I enjoyed, but we must be careful for what we ask. your freiend and God speed Lynn
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:20:13 AM # 1.0.0.1119
powerful poem, you chose themes as subtle and make impressive poems out of them....too good. full marks
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