As Verse Yet Not Blank Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As Verse Yet Not Blank

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Verse yet not the blank
blanketed by the smokes of fire
as when frayed
by the fangs of desire,

love is not blank
as verse of the heart
yet not the void vile amuck
as glanced inhered sovereign

as the rhythm into the river
as the love is yet mightier
than pen as when wrought
by the inkling of love as passion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 23 March 2008

the poetic features like VERSE, BLANK again known as blank verse is beautifully linked with various aspect of life. Blank offers a pun here...sensible and sensitive

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Alison Cassidy 23 December 2007

This poem looks deep into the heart of life and love and poetry. Your words flow like music. Your heart is open. Your spirit shines. love, Allie xxxx

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Patrice James 23 December 2007

superb thanks for shaing...you are no1 fantastic write.

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Emancipation Planz 19 December 2007

Blank to bank.... As a viper I could sink my teeth into this... the verse draws me to images of billowing cloud shapes that takes away the blankness and the worthy piece then transforms as sometime to be bank-ed on instead.. xx

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Thad Wilk 17 December 2007

Your right Dr. Kar! Love is not passion alone, no verse can truly explain the depths. Best regards: Thad *10*!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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