As Their Old Age Is Just Going To Pass Poem by Akanksha Bhatt

As Their Old Age Is Just Going To Pass

Rating: 4.0


I don't know why he do that?
Which he should never do,
Why he let his parents out
Of which I'll never think about!

Parents feel so sad inside
But they will never show
From outside they will shine bright
But from inside they are low.

They loved you from the moment you weren't born
But now, why to shout at them as a truck's horn
He had a fever they got headache
His mum made dishes for him with a cake.

He sent them in an old age's home
where they feels like in a gaol
Their eyes always struck at the door
Waiting for their child to come and take them home.

Eyes got paining but he never came
By hurting his parents he'll not get any fame.
Why do he do such a great sin
Respect them and in all his work he'll win.

Why to make them upset
He'll not get anything by doing that,
Yes but-except of becoming sad.
Be a Man,
Bring them back,
Spent time with them,
As Their Old Age Is Just Going To Pass.

AS THEIR OLD AGE IS JUST GOING TO PASS..!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem, about the ones who don't give respect to their parents and don't let them live with them. The ones who forget all love given by their parents. They will never know how much their parents love them. I Don't know why They don't understand that there will be a time when they will also get old as the parents at this time. Their children will also be doing like that with them! And they deserve it! As the old proverb says-
'Give Respect, Have Respect'...!
So please love them as there isn't much time to let you show all your love for them....! ! !

HOPE YOU LIKE AND ENJOY IT! And if YES please 'THUMBS UP' and 'COMMENT'...!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Straussfield 10 October 2012

Well expressed in all simplicity...keep it up, your parents should be proud

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Allemagne Roßmann 10 October 2012

Great poem and inspirational write herewith.Good job

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 October 2012

I am deeply moved by the message... Kudos! ! !

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Philo Yan 17 October 2012

You are young and yet wisdom of the old A budding poet you shall unfold A good conscience, can be bold, Many more poems to be told.

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2012

Great message, i like a poem with positive message, upgrading for better life...this is a nice work, just keep it up! _Soul

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Jocie kings 21 May 2019

Wow what a great poem you have made

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Sandy Player 04 January 2013

A noble ambition: to make the world a better place. Your words may have mistakes but they will always inspire!

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Rishit Desai 27 October 2012

The poem has a good soul.

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Francisca Darko 24 October 2012

This is a great write! ! :)

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Daniel Einstein 20 October 2012

Great poem, many comments, nothing much left to say, other than good work.

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