As The Time Passed Bye Poem by Hana 1225

As The Time Passed Bye



In this place
It’s empty
It’s boring
I could do nothing
Just as the time passed bye

I sit down
Lay on the floor
Close my eyes
As the second ticked bye

Straightened my back
Change my position
Open my eyes
Breathing slowly
As the time passed bye

No sun
No wind
No clouds
No one
I’m alone

As the second ticked bye
As the time passed bye
And I believe that
It’s the time to say
“Good bye”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 22 November 2008

this poem is very nice.i like the rising action of it its sth u can`t find in most of the poems its unique.

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Manonton Dalan 04 October 2008

i could relate to you. play soduku or write poems. truthful expression. beautiful poem. thanks.md

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Trinity K 22 June 2008

we will do what is required what is conspired we be good we be lonely but we will BE! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Andre Lopez 15 June 2008

it describes well the feeling of loneliness

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