David Wood

Silver Star - 3,972 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

As The River Flows Along - Poem by David Wood

The field was dotted with them,
Hay bales stacked high on high
With field mice and shrews making hay
Running and playing between the bales
And red kites circling overhead, waiting.
The June sun shone down casting shadows.

A large oak tree accommodating all life,
Grubs and worms weaved between its roots
Ants, spiders and beetles made super
High roads along its trunk and branches.
Birds sang their song high on the bough
And squirrels passed each other along its trunk.

Willow trees lined the banks of the river
Separating fields either side of it.
The field across the river saw rabbits
Playing in the sun between rows of
Corn, leaping and dancing without worry.

Bulrushes and toad rush lined the edge
Of the river where coots, with their shiny
Black bodies and white foreheads
Swam with Mallard ducks and their young.
The water sparkling in the sunlight
As the river flows along towards the sea.

Farm workers returning after lunch with
A tractor and trailer start loading bales of hay
Laughing and joking as they worked.
Smoke from a cigarette wafted in the breeze
And noise from the tractor floated high in the air.

Nature in all its beauty filled the air, the fields
And river as life passed slowly by as it had done
For hundreds of years when men used Shire
Horses and four wheeled carts and mice and
Shrews played in the sun between hay stacks.
The beauty of the countryside forever unchanging.


Comments about As The River Flows Along by David Wood

  • Gold Star - 12,526 Points Amitava Sur (4/4/2014 6:15:00 AM)

    A lovely picture of the country side was drawn in this wonderful poem.... loved it (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 773 Points Mike Barrett (11/24/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    David, yours is a wonderful gift......you're able to paint scenes that cause one to feel that they are there with you taking it all in both with silent gratitude and the same degree of appreciation. Very well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/3/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Wow wonderful poem...Each lines so beautifully expressed that it give the complete picture of farms....
    Loved reading it....Beautiful write.

    Thank you Sir, for the Beautiful and valuable comments...Which I will always store in my Autograph...
    As well as the beautiful remarks on my poet's page....Your words are inspiring...
    I will visit next week to PH to read yours poems.
    Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points R.benjamin Abate (7/17/2013 7:59:00 PM)

    This is so musical and splendid. Thanks again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/18/2013 10:54:00 PM)

    Wooooow! What an amazing poem, great imagery in this superb poem David, you painted a picture that never leaves the mind of a reader...amazing write.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/13/2013 7:54:00 PM)

    taking us to the country side. nice imagery. a story well told. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,337 Points Lyn Paul (6/7/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    What a beautiful descriptive write. You are certainly a great STORY TELLER. Thank you David (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (6/7/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    The continuity of Nature is a comforting thought - not sure that it's true anymore though.
    Still, it's a lovely picture and poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (6/6/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    It's awesome Wood, Everything but the tick! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Julie Schleppegrell (6/6/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful write David. You're very talented. Have a great day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,755 Points Valsa George (6/5/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    Nature in all its beauty abounds here in this poem taking me to my beautiful country side with its fields of paddy and bales of corn during the harvest season! Vast stretches of land where towering 'Teak' trees and squirrels running up and down their trunk is a common sight! ! Instead of horse carts, we had bullock carts! ! Beautiful poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (6/5/2013 12:08:00 AM)

    a beautiful image i got when i read your poem / poems....and the image is of nature...with sweet words and rhythm.what a reader wants more.. an exquisite poem..10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (6/4/2013 4:07:00 PM)

    A fantastic poem, it brings back a lot of memories.
    I used to work on a farm in my younger days. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (6/4/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem David about nature it is so descriptive you make the reader feel as if they are there.
    Val has written one on the Weeping Willow and along with this poem they are both great pieces of work.
    well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,231 Points Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    Very descriptive, can just picture the scene. Nice write David. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 916 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/4/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    All the wonderful aspects of Nature are beautifully reflected - As the river flows along! Fabulous! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,201 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/4/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    Reminds of famous lines of Tennyson
    Men may come and men may go
    But I go on for ever
    You developed the entire background beautifully. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 4, 2013


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