As The Night Claims The Moon Poem by Lora Colon

As The Night Claims The Moon

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Just as sure as the night claims the moon,
And as each dawn claims the rising sun,
I'll gather the woes that burden your heart
And claim them all, one by one

Just as the tide claims the waiting shore,
And the soil claims every seed that's sown,
With fortitude only love can renew
I'll claim your pain for my own

Just as the rose claims the morning dew,
And the bee claims his throne on the flower,
I'll stay with you, sharing your darkest nights,
And I'll claim each lonely hour

Just as each star lays claim to the sky
And for their theft they need not atone,
So I feel no guilt in stealing your heart
And claiming it for my own

Just as death will one day stake its claim
And over my grave they'll place a stone
So inscribed: His love was a fleeting dream,
Yet she claimed it for her own

Tuesday, November 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 07 December 2016

and change it's to it is. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 07 December 2016

2nd to last line of my poem should start with a, not A

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Seamus O Brian 01 December 2016

I am struck silent by the wonder of this piece. But I will force my fingers to try and type the song these words made my heart sing. You have captured here a perspective of love in such a way that in all of my years I have the sense I have stumbled across something beautifully new. I was so captivated by that first stanza, that I did not want to move on, but relish it a few times over (can I admit timidly that I feared the remainder could not be as compelling as the first?) . But, to the contrary, you carried the quiet, earnest power of that first stanza all the way through. What a moving glimpse of the power of a love whose strength is such that it endures without recompense. You have blessed me with the most beautiful thoughts I have recently experienced. Thank you.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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