As Say The Pupils....... Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

As Say The Pupils.......

Rating: 4.8


This is our school,
We follow every rule.
We are beautiful flowers,
Having lots of powers.
We study in a good way,
Busy in study, the whole day.
Teachers are our guide,
And we all abide.
Competition is high,
And we all try.
Principal is the captain of our ship,
And we are the passengers of this trip.
Our school is the best,
Put us to any test.
We will be stars and moon,
Very, Very, Very soon.

Friday, July 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: children
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2015

So nicely depicted about an ideal School and ideal pupils. Intresting. Heart touching lines I feel are...Principal is the captain of our ship, And we are the passengers of this trip.Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2015

school is a symbiotic relationship. Well described here

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 August 2015

Very nice. Loved the emotion involved in the lines.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 August 2015

A nice description of a school, liked it.........................

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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2015

Pertinent message within this one! Teacher is captain of the ship guiding and directing and students are the crew learning and doing work needed to have a successful voyage in life. Great imagery, sensible and imaginative! Love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2016

We follow every rule! That is very important in life; following after righteous works. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2015

A wonderful picture of a school which should qualify as an ideal place because of its Principal and teachers as well as its competitive environment and its proximity to nature. Thanks.

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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

Competition is high, - smt competition kills people. smt saves!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 August 2015

A great place of learning - The school. i wish i had studied in such an exemplary school where the Principal was the captain of the ship guiding us. Dear teacher! You already are a star!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 12 August 2015

Nice! This could be an opening song for every schoolday! Why don't you have a musician put it to music?

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