'' As One Very Powerful Deity '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' As One Very Powerful Deity ''

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Gods created the universe,
That's what numerous bibles state,
All life the creators did disperse,
Then they left us to our fate.

The miracle is the diversity of life,
Just how do we all survive?
Is it these Gods who give us strife?
Or do they help us to stay alive?

What came first the chicken or the egg?
I guess only the Gods can tell,
It truly is a question to beg,
It's like, is there a Heaven and Hell.

They must all be really clever,
As it was completed in six full days,
Work on the seventh, never,
That's their day to laze.

Could that mean that Gods needs rest?
Surely that can't be true,
I would imagine they'd all be full of zest,
Or I'd imagine chaos would ensue.

An endless cosmos forever evolving,
Keeping it safe is a major task,
Constant problems which do need resolving,
For our Gods help we all tend to ask.

They must be busy all year round,
Well apart from their day of leisure,
Wherever there's trouble to be found,
We all pray to our national treasure.

Humans believe in multiple Gods,
Yet religion can be so unforgiving,
That is why we are all at odds,
Dying is the reason we are living.

Before we pass we live in hope,
That to Gods Heaven we will ascend,
If we don't, how would we cope,
As past mistakes we cannot amend.

Who made them and who made their maker?
Or are they all just one big illusion,
If they are that would be an Earth shaker,
All that would do is create more confusion.

Myself, well I've been thinking hard,
If these beings are so high and mighty,
The creator of the Gods I would have to regard,

‘' As One Very Powerful Deity ‘'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 26 October 2012

Very good that you have been thinking about it, Bri Mar. Spirituality tends to fill a void. If we believe only in our senses we may be cheated many times. We see rainbows that are not really there, we see horizons, wet roads on hot days and so many more things that are just visual illusions. Even the stars we see in the skies are no longer on the place we see them since the light may have traveled for so many lightyears. We do have feelings as well and even though they can cheat us as well, we have to take them for real. Ignoring our feelings can be dangerous. Many people have experienced the presence of a supernatural Being. Our atheists believe that this experience is a false one, that spiritual people are just cheating themselves. But the expereince can be or at least feel very real. I think it is really hard to grasp the larger Truth but keep seeking, keep thinking is the message. Narrow minded power-addicted religious leaders have misled large numbers of people by scaring them and by promising them things they cannot promise. Sure enough, that is true. But all of us do have a soul. It is somewhere deep inside of us and if we try to connect to our soul, we can experience a spiritual dimension that feels very real. Once you experience it, a life without it seems lacking a great deal. All I try to say, is please keep an open mind and try to reach deep inside. Many answers to life's great question are to be found there.

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