As Long As I Am Alive....... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

As Long As I Am Alive.......

Rating: 5.0


Always, your soul reside in my heart
Our love is not like gloomy, bright like sunshine
We share our wonderful feelings without hesitation
I immerse you completely into me when you give me yourself
You purified my soul and brought out my emotions
I never knew that your love will bring out my real life
There's so much love unfolding from my heart
and its need your love to free from my loneliness
Sometimes its aches because we are far apart
Sometimes tears slips down my face because
your part of my bed is vacant and kept me sad
A kiss on my lips could wet my heart with heaviness
I will always love you even when the rain wash me out
or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away
As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

‘You purified my soul and brought out my emotions’ Love is Pure and hallows others…and oneself too Fine diction of emotion 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Luwi Habte 21 September 2009

dear ravi this is so nice and lovely piece your poem are really wonderful well done there luwi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2009

will always love you even when the rain wash me out or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die lovely feelings inthe heart...oenmust strive vry honestly in love.....vey good poem readmien homeboound...come home...dirvorce...(use rating also.from 1 to 10)

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