As Im With You.. Poem by Dislocated Heart

As Im With You..



my sudden interest..
in you, as weird as that may sound..
im starting to like you.
i know you got guys all around you.
i know im just another friend of yours.
but i hope that maybe, you'll give me a try?

i know i aint much,
i know i dont have everything.
but for you ill try and give all that i've got.
i wanna be your man.
can i?
will you accept me?
cause as i speak to you everyday..
im falling more and more in love with you.
my heart pounds like no other.
my love for you grows.
as you lean against me..
my heart pounds
a thousand times faster...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Collison 01 April 2008

WOW..thats kinda how my friend feels about me lol..kinda weird to say..Well i love the poem! ! Keep writing! ! Your a GREAT poet! !

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Jona Polo-Ramirez 15 March 2008

Hi, Expressive. Let her know you care. Keep up with the writing. It'll be great for you.

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linzi- kidd 14 March 2008

amazing... if u let that girl read this poem.. she just might understand how much u like her..

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 13 March 2008

uh...let me guess whos that poem for? probably for some girl... lol jk great poem! very awesome -curly

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Coreena Dejesus 11 March 2008

penned very beautifully, thanks for sharing.

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