As If I'D Fallen In Its Waves By Sophy Chen Poem by Sophy Chen

Sophy Chen

Sophy Chen

Lueyang County, Hanzhong City, Shaanxi Province of China.

As If I'D Fallen In Its Waves By Sophy Chen

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As if I'd Fallen in Its Waves Sonnet 12
by Sophy Chen

As I was back to my country crossing the bridge
The Jialing River bathing in sun rising always
I would think of you by leaning on its railings
As if I'd fallen in its waves in one thousand years

If I did not cross it I'd see you every day
I'd touch your smile, your lady killer eyes
I thought I'd rather touch your eyes forever
You may not know the bridge I suffered so

In that year I must pass the ancient bridge
As soon as possible, for if I did not cross it
I was quite sure I would drop into the river
And disappear without any echoes forever

The bridge has been damaging almost for 20 years
Where is your charming eyes, the bridge knows


2014-03-11 In Guangzhou China

Monday, December 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem that i wrote to my first love! Sophy Chen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hartal 16 October 2017

Do not cross the bridge before you reach it, says an old proverb. An intriguing love poem in classic format. Best wishes, Sophy. Paul Hartal

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Asavri Dhillon 03 February 2016

....I'd touch your smile, your lady killer eyes I thought I'd rather touch your eyes forever... Love it..

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Sophy Chen 03 February 2016

Dear thanks for your reading and thanks

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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2015

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sophy Chen 02 May 2015

thanks Dike , i will read yours and translate your words to Chinese readers

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Clarence Prince 29 December 2014

This poem sounds like someone who is really in love with one who doesn't know it! Have faith, there is hope! Thanks for sharing, Sophy!

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Sophy Chen 02 May 2015

thanks Prince i will tell Chinese readers what you have said here for this peoms and translate your master piece to Chinese readers sophy

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 December 2014

The bridge has been damaging almost for 20 years Where is your charming eyes, the bridge knows Beautifully composed poem on love.Well expressed.I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Sophy Chen 11 September 2015

thanks Col, for your kind words

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