As I Watched You Die Poem by Kandi Behagg
As I Watched You Die
I know my eyes should still be crying
But they are forever dry because I watched you die
A million wishes were weighting on your mind underneith the stars
That were left behind
I saw it in your eyes as I watched you die
Reliant on my chidhood fantacies they are now just memories
At last relief and peace and free
I saw it in you eyes as I watched you die
With no more question and no more doubt
I know your fight was through
I saw it in your eyes as I watched you die
very sweet kandi, keep writing.you will find a peace come upon you.i have wrote many poems for my wife.so how i think both of them are up there reading our poems together..
This is very beautiful! A deeply touching poem! A natural flow and the repetition of the title is timed well throughout. My eyes are leaky after reading it! Cyber hugs ((()))
A beautiful poem, he will be very proud of your work as he watches over you.
death is not a negation of life..............it is an art................not everybody can do it well........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful poem, never stop writing. I hope to see more -A