As I Ramble True Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Ramble True

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where had you been to the query of dream
leaving the night and darkness yet apart,
as the leaf stripped off from its stock
stillness when pervades in its room of blood

as in the midst of legion’s stream
searching the friend yet of love
but of no avail that happens to happen
as when blanked by the winds of winter

yet all seeming chilled even the blue
yet I see the dawn in dream coming true
with warmth of the day when I ramble true
looking to the sun crooning to the east.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ewigi Liebe 06 December 2007

Life has riches to offer Some will fade with the years And all the remains Are just traces of tears. Hold onto your Truth The Realities that you know Sleep and let your mind be free Imagination goes wild and untamed This is where the Truths and Where the Realities begin Hold tight dear one and Dream...

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Catrina Heart 06 July 2009

Great written poem sir....well structured and rhymed...............

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Abha Sharma 20 March 2008

The rambling is definitely subconscious, and it is always true, leaving the night and darkness yet apart…. A beautiful line ………………………….. There is hope, optimism, picturesque imagery all together….

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Duncan Wyllie 16 December 2007

yet all seeming chilled even the blue yet I see the dawn in dream coming true with warmth of the day when I ramble true looking to the sun crooning to the east. So much feeling put into this Dr Subhendu Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 14 December 2007

When one individual gifted with words and tries to put it in pen, it is one like you that will open the horizon of others to unravel the mystery of poetry. Very well then. Thanks for sharing! ! !

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Patrice James 07 December 2007

what can i say more than, well penned.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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