As I Meet You Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Meet You

Rating: 5.0


When I meet you in thin air spread over a time
Yet ever extending, . I rock you in quest of love
You sneak to me to my soul more deeper within
Shimmering like an angel with magical wings

You tune to my soul razzling over my passion
Engulfing me and my whole being steeped in love
When you slowly swaddle across the the youth
Driven by the will intemperate reasoned to the swing.

Yet I do not know reason that reasoned the love
That happens to happen as dew falling from night
And my enchanted soul ramified for searching upon
The smiles in response to my passion’s light divine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lillian J. 26 August 2007

Beautiful work with spiritual tones throughout. Nicely done! Lilly :)

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Alison Cassidy 26 August 2007

The ecstasy of the divine is expressed through personal passion in this boldly flowing poem with some fascinating images - 'thin air spread over time', 'you sneak into my soul'. Playful yet always with reverence. Beautiful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Mary Das 29 August 2007

Lovely poem. Vey deep in meaning.

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Melvina Germain 30 August 2007

I love the imagry shown through your word usage, it flows beautifully with spiritual tones captured within, Excellent poem Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina--

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divine love.........placing ur lover to the status of an angel, having magical wings, that rings all buitful feelings in you. of course i loved it, gr8 wrk...10 marks from me...really lovely........

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beautiful poem filled by warm passion and needs..enjoyed the reading...10+++++

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Richa Dhodi 11 May 2008

Dr Subhendu, you poems are really nice, each competing the other. i like this slab especially as a beautiful revelation of love and the smooth flowing of love which you have amazingly potrayed from your words bonded me till the end.. i loved it. thanks for sharing... ric

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Tsira Goge 22 February 2008

Hello Dr subhendu kar, Very sensitively... Fine poems... Thanks you for the comment... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 17 January 2008

Very well chosen Beauty filled words....and extremily romantic and an enjoyable read that pulls you in and makes you remember when you feel like your floating and in Love.It feels amazing doesn't it..... Keep sharing I Love the words you string together most likely with little effort. ((Smile)) at least that is what it seems when the reader pours over them. Take care of u Shelley

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Sherry Arzish 22 November 2007

dr shahib you sound like a famous urdu poet faiz ahmed faiz, same romanticism same beauty and imagination

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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