As I Lay In This State Poem by Bryan LeBlanc

As I Lay In This State

Rating: 3.5


As I lay in this state
I am surrounded by darkness
And I can’t help but wait
As the light shines through

As the time goes by
The darkness fades
And I can’t help but cry
As the light begins to shine

As I begin to see
I think of the light
And how it set me free
As I start to wake

As I lay in this state
I see no darkness
And it’s not too late
To follow the light

As I lay in this state...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muriel Emerson 06 May 2008

this poem is awesome i love poetry you should check out some of my poetry too you are a creative writer and i would like to get to know you.........i like getting to know people

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David Desantis 15 April 2008

Very nice my friend, interesting poem of hope. I agree w/ some of the comments below, you have a gift to develop

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.Kathryn Van Atta 04 March 2008

i like it, very nice; ]

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 03 March 2008

you do have a real writting gift i really hope that you write more cause you are really great i love this poem

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Beautifully written. You have a gift for writting! Write more! ! ! !

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