As Golden Chance Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As Golden Chance

Rating: 2.8


Enjoy childhood
Play in neighborhood
Make friends
And nicely end too

Daily new experience
With friends and nices
Parents rejoice
You have made good choice

Now youth
For venture and easy breath
New course to decide
Horizon is wide

Options are open
Chances are even
Think independently
And listen to aptly

Develop positive mind
Be firm but kind too
People may favor
Also pay honor

Make life worth
As it is to be created on earth
Human life demands sacrifice
Think of it and make choice

Nothing will change
Until you manage
Age may advance
Take it as golden chance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Enjoy childhood Play in neighborhood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Weeping willow Nicely expressed are your words; ]

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Ben Taylor58 minutes ago Nice work, elaborate on the poem and fill it with a little more thought and content! Otherwise, nice effort!

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Marvin Brato 06 November 2013

Great write, all positive options to do in life are mentioned....these are the ways we can live a contented life! Thank you!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Dharmendra Arya likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

beautiful Kathleen Jinks59 minutes ago I love this Comment +1 Great topic

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Debra Lalli57 minutes ago I love your fourth stanza

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

i like Marcos Estrada59 minutes ago =) Comment +1 Way short, way limited.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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