As Autumn Ends Poem by Jessica Robert
As Autumn Ends
As autumn ends
The leaves fall from the branches
Leaving them bare with no protection
From the snipping bites of winter winds
As the Snow Angel falls
Leisurely to the ground
She turns the brilliante sky
Dark with her power
Soon, she becomes too prevailing
Everything begins to change too fast
Her wings melt from her
Onto the the earth
Her body ripping apart
Covering the soil with her heart shattering pale beauty
Suddenly, angry winds begin to blow
Her rage striking out like lightening through the haze
She's consumed with evil control
Craving it with a passion, to taste it on her tongue
Her plan is to tenet
As she fills the sky's the pillows
Until they burst with powder
More glorious glory falls from the sky
Drowining us in flurry
Strangling us in a blanket
But gradualy, she sees what she's become
She's nothing more than a demon from the sky
She commands the flurry to halt
And tries to melt her proof away
Preparing the earth for spring
The season of apologie
For what's she's done
All this
As autumn ends
Coldness and melancholy is manevolently eddies in this poem.Good sensations.
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Amazing composition with wonderful metaphor. Added my 10 to it with pleasure.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/14/2024 7:28:41 AM # 1.0.0.1119
': Suddenly, angry winds begin to blow Her rage striking out like lightening through the haze' Is 'angry winds' the subject of the second phrase? You express your disdain for winter pretty well but the rhythm of the poem is rather convoluted. Study meter especially with English grammar and poetic structure. Read classic poems along with modern ones.