As An Artist Poem by Heather Burns

As An Artist

Rating: 3.6


I carefully paint
a picture on my
canvas

with each stroke
I wipe away a tear

causing a smile to
reappear.

As an artist

I endow your face
with my brush

making it more
perfect as I go

until at last the
image of my love
I see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 09 July 2013

until at last the image of my love I see. Very beautifully painted your feelings. Wiping a tear and causing a smile to reappear is not an easy job, which you've done so well.

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Wahab Abdul 09 July 2013

very fantastic, i love to read it... very original and the point is universal

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Shahzia Batool 09 July 2013

an earnest and candid expression indeed!

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Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

Wow, , , , , excellent poem! ! ! ! every word have its life! ! !

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem with such craft of talking. Thanks for sharing.

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Joseph Anderson 12 July 2013

An ethereally divine concept, painted with an inspired brush.You make life and love a treasure

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Sandra Feldman 11 July 2013

Must be wonderful to be able to paint Love and the perfect image of the one you love as You see that person. Lovely and original poem, Enjoyed it

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Sandra Feldman 11 July 2013

Must be wonderful to be able to paint Love and the perfect image of the one you love as You see that person. Lovely and original poem, Enjoyed it

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Vishal Sharma 09 July 2013

i love lovely and sweet words, and your words are sweeter than a choco pie,

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