# As A Day Began Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# As A Day Began

Rating: 2.8


surprisingly
as the day began
i woke up like a flower
fresh and blooming
with life..not the gloom
of yesterday in my eye
walked out....
to see a drooped flower
not wishing me good morning
the birds forget their chirruping
a filtered gray sunshine
nothing i have ever seen
seemed like a left over day
is it a dream...or a mock of
what i usually AM i think
as the clock struck six
to wake me from my dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 28 May 2010

A ring of truth shouts out in this poem as we all seem to have mornings like this a page from life for sure, regards

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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2010

every morning gives new hopes...a new leaf in life to whither out at the end of the day good thinking...10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 April 2010

Early morning dreams, they say, may come true in real life. Better have good dreams.

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 April 2010

Fine beginning of the day.Well written.

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