Arthritis Poem by Indira Renganathan

Arthritis

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Had you not been supportive to me in the past
Could I have done so much with my life
Presently like a rickety lid guarding not
A chest of treasure, with imbalanced postural shakes
Oh my head and limbs rickety, why guarding not
My chest of life

Tuesday, August 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: health,life,social,age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 August 2018

Arthritis is more of an age related ailment! From the age of forty five, I started suffering from Rheumatoid Arthritis and had been bedridden for sometime. Though now age has advanced more, my condition is much better! Had you not been supportive to me in the past Could I have done so much with my life................................ these opening lines come from a grateful heart! Yes, we have to be thankful to God for having taken care of our life so far!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

Typos: Please ignore repetition of 'the'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

Had you not been supportive to me in the past Could I have done so much with my life...........These two lines are the the epitome of this beautiful poem! Thanks dear madam for sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

This is a beautiful poem on arthritis and health having impressive expression with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10

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