Arrival Poem by Ursula Tillmann

Arrival

Rating: 5.0


Finally there
and within -
all of me and
more to come.

Shedding off
dust from
detours not
anticipated.

Tilling my
own gardens
finally for
my harvest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 16 May 2008

I like your handwriting - laconic and strong... And as fine balance real and irreal feelings of the poetess. Sincerely, Tsira.

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Rema Prasanna 25 April 2008

Beautiful poem, i can find a reflective ray of hope in those lines

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Alison Cassidy 22 April 2008

I feel the pain of loss lingering behind this poem and a rainbow just visible at the end. Beautifully written. Not a word wasted. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 April 2008

and thats the repose ultimate from where we take the detour when being poised by the color and the fragrance in its own room..................excellent art of imagery bedecking when lucid yet lusciouas green by the hope, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Ursula Tillmann

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