Arena Poem by Sarah Child

Arena

Rating: 5.0


The metallic smell of blood
Mixes with the sand
As it spills from yet another victim

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 17 April 2011

Beautiful. Fantastic documentation of animalism. Panic and uncertainty.....dominates our dailyness. First line is unique: The metallic smell of blood...metallic is the word hits the mechanical wheeling of existence. Nice. Regards, pranab k chakraborty

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Romeo Della Valle 17 April 2011

A very deep, thought provoking write, well penned and poignant! Full of imagery and depth which shows your great talent! Keep it up! Food for thought you are delivering here! thanks for sharing with us (The world) ! 10+++ Love and Peace for always!

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