Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Aquarius - Poem by Valerie Dohren

The Fish are dying
Polluted our crystal clear waters
Our once green valleys, choked and grey
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Comments about Aquarius by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 5,843 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/19/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    the end of one era and the beginning of another cycle.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,518 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    very nice imagery...this poem is very cool! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,136 Points Amitava Sur (4/14/2014 8:07:00 AM)

    A very thoughtful write detailing how the nature is threatened, though we try to camouflage . (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/31/2013 5:42:00 PM)

    this is the age of Aquarius good read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (9/12/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    You are so right with this poem, I always feel watched everywhere I this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chris Blazo (8/14/2012 1:27:00 PM)

    I really like how you feel in this write. We actually have very similar thoughts on nature. I am an avid birder too! Good job on the portraying of anger towards destruction and being kept under finger! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 316 Points Richard D. Remler (5/23/2012 8:22:00 PM)

    Stark observations. Fierce reminder that just because we live here, it doesn't mean we own the place. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (5/21/2012 8:42:00 AM)

    concern for the world... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/11/2012 3:35:00 AM)

    A good insight into the world today, a very descriptive poem, nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (4/1/2012 7:42:00 PM)

    The first two stanzas serve as moving jabs to our consciences.
    The last illustrates very well the complexity of modern life. (Report) Reply

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