Aquarius Poem by Valerie Dohren
Aquarius
The Fish are dying
Polluted our crystal clear waters
Our once green valleys, choked and grey
With the debris of living
Lost is all Virginity
And the orbs clamber through space, gasping for breath
The trees are lifeless
Wilted the flowers
Only their deathly form remains
Impinged upon my soul - I grieve
For nature`s stolen life
Yet now a new Age dawns amidst the turmoil
Promise of a Golden Age for man
(Insensitive automaton)
And everywhere the cry:
'Big Brother is watching you'
'BIG-BRO-THER-IS-WATCH-ING-YOU'
Stark observations. Fierce reminder that just because we live here, it doesn't mean we own the place. Great write.
the end of one era and the beginning of another cycle..
A very thoughtful write detailing how the nature is threatened, though we try to camouflage .
I really like how you feel in this write. We actually have very similar thoughts on nature. I am an avid birder too! Good job on the portraying of anger towards destruction and being kept under finger!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 4:35:33 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A good insight into the world today, a very descriptive poem, nice one.