Aqua Marinae (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Beautiful Haiku! Shadows and unseen currents, in dusky colors. Very-very interesting! (:

Hello poet Mihaela. Absolutely beautiful, I enjoyed, Loyd

Hello Mihaela! The haiku is always a poem which can stand as pure observation, with maybe a quiet meditation implied or stated. That's how I read this, but then I wondered if something more threatening was meant. Certain words took on danger: could the swirling mean danger? Am I over-reacting or is there peril in paradise? (I hope not.)

An insightful haiku nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

Muse! Beneath the sunlight; with the ways of nature. nice work.

Fantastic magery, one of my favourite forms of poetry.....

.........beautiful haiku...love the imagery ★

I enjoyed this pretty haiku. Thanks.