Shahzia Batool

Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points (Pakistan)

April In The Lawn! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Exotic perfumes
divine display of colors
the Elysian scene!


Comments about April In The Lawn! by Shahzia Batool

  • Rookie - 169 Points Brian Jani (6/29/2014 4:45:00 AM)

    no matter how short it id this little poem is good and has room for expansion (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (4/20/2014 5:26:00 AM)

    ...such a calm light beam_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Dinesh Nair (4/20/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    So occasional haikus too are up your sleeves Shahziaji... A fine break of the kind! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (4/16/2014 11:02:00 AM)

    Brevity is the soul of this small wonder! A lovely Haiku, Shazia.10 ke upar he. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (4/16/2014 9:57:00 AM)

    Lovely haiku from your pen, Shahzia. Last line speaks volumes. Enjoying life fully in this spring season particularly after retirement with relaxed bent of mind. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,732 Points Valsa George (4/15/2014 12:44:00 AM)

    Spring is here and Elysian fields, brought down with flowers of exquisite beauty and fragrance! A sweet haiku! A10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/14/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Blissful poem describing the beauty around. Short and sweet haiku. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,671 Points Valerie Dohren (4/13/2014 2:55:00 PM)

    Lovely haiku Shahzia. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014


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