Appreciate Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Appreciate

Rating: 5.0


When light so divine,
Reveals a view truly mild;
Lives nature's design.

Birds, on trees that twine,
As well as other beasts wild,
Behold a world so fine.

If smog was to dine
On life, nature will be piled
In a world to pine.

If love on the line
Is let so, peace will be filed
To make the world shine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 April 2010

‘When light so divine, /Reveals a view truly mild; /Lives nature's design.’ Sparkling take off… soooooo nice…enjoyed ‘Design’ wow! ! Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 February 2010

i can see your pattern here... if you want me to make a poem and apply a pattern like this.... as of now(February 7,2010) you just can't make me do it... it's hard! nice job! thumbs up!

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