Apple Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Apple



Nature naughty
Sitting on the tree
Pulled an apple
An’ threw it down
Inadvertently…

Down the tree
It struck
On the head of
The meditating
Philosophy!

Crazy!
It turned out
To be a big inventive
Technology!

29th January 2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 February 2010

lovely sir...when i started i thought it may be adam...finally it turned out the crazy gravity...10

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Catrina Heart 03 February 2010

Interesting poetic lines yet scientific one as law of gravity stated...

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Indira Renganathan 05 February 2010

The meditating Philosophy! ....only this makes the reader puzzle first...but soon cleared....a nice attept of innovation at the invention....thank you

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Chitra - 05 February 2010

'The Crazy Gravity'..a nice poetic tribute!

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Eyan Desir 06 February 2010

Written by an intelligent man

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Raj Arumugam 06 April 2010

clear lines that illustrate the nature of the partnership between the creative/inventive mind and nature

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 21 February 2010

such original thinking, hats off to you

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 February 2010

great... satirical piece... amusing...thoughts' provoking... apple..the legend of original sin the fruit of knowledge... from tilling the land to high technology nowadays... very nice idea....brilliant thoughts....as always... 10+++ Snow

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2010

Excellent satire and quite amusing. as well. We are helpless against nature and all of its mysterious ways.10+, Always your friend, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino 10 February 2010

seems the apple plays a significant role in our lives...from Adam and Eve to Newton.....

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