I know writing this may be futile,
‘cause of all the atrocious words I’ve said, but
May I be pardoned to speak a few words of truth?
Stingy must have been what you felt after my
Ostensibly hurtful assault of words.
Rest assured, these words were empty.
Regret constantly loomed over me as I
Yelled those violent slurs and insults.
Damn me for my indiscretions and selfishness.
I can’t comprehend what I’m leaving behind
All I could ever ask for now resents my soul
No one can absolutely fill the gap in my heart
Nor rectify the mistake I have committed.
All I know is I’ve created a grim catastrophe for myself.
Its never too late. Self-admission is a very positive attitude towards life. Nice apologatic words, must be appreciated. Naseer
very heartfelt.. humility is main root of repentance... a man is truly wonderful when he is capable of saying sorry..nice one..10
to apologize makes the concern person know the fault..there's no harm in it..this letter is well penned..grace
Great use of wordds, like the poem/letter Well written Keep it up.
oh my... yes you do have a great vocab. thanks for your critizism of my poem bipolar and yeah its a little well duh, but i really did just want somthing for people to be able to read quickly and for the rhyme to flow. sorry it's taken so long to comment one of your poems: D take care
Such a beautiful poem. It really sounded like a letter. I loved the ending. It really wrapped up the whole poem well =]
that is a beautiful, sincere and genious letter which caused her to be back to you..well expressed..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
don’t worry Alex, we too are on board! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !