Apart Poem by Nika McGuin

Apart

Rating: 3.5


the birthday of an affectionless
father, we are apart.

And the sister-like cousin from whom
I am growing apart.

To hear news of you - good
or bad - because we are apart

my emotions are mixed
and stirred
like confetti cake batter

I who pushed you both away
as you simultaneously pushed me
feel the doormat-like urges resurge
the impulse to dial your numbers
fades as quickly as it came

I still know
your natures
and why we
tend to clash.
it pains me
we are apart
but so it must be.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
~Nika
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

I am growing apart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Daniel Brick 07 March 2014

This must have been a difficult poem to write, and to read after you wrote it. But it shows a maturity of spirit that you tell the truth about your family relations with not a trace of negativity. Just admitting that being together would cause problems that make being apart the best situation - well, it takes courage to do that. As a poem, there's not a false step in the whole piece; its most important component is its honesty, and having said that, I've said enough.

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