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Unwritten Soul


Anywhere with you


Sense the beauty
In a garden of immortality
Guarding our eternal memory
Stay bloom in flowers perfume
For I am not hiding it from you
Even not in a pinch of seconds
Love of mine, always be yours
Maybe I keep it somewhere
But don't ask me where
Nowhere else but in you
If you just find mine
Underneath your heart
Find, you will find
Somewhere inside
Where our smiles alive
Indestructible in times
Growing old remain young
A sense of beauty i have
A treasure i buried in you
Nowhere else but in you
So please keep mine cared
Even my lips say goodbye
My heart and soul wont be
Someday I may die
Among the dust i will lay
Forever the love alive, it will
Never fade, your love i feel still
As true loves lasting in time
For you i hide in your heart
Not anymore secret of me
Ages of body till soul only
Guarded to be eternally
In a beautiful soul garden
A garden of immortality

Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013
Edited: Thursday, February 14, 2013

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This piece of poetry initially intended for a collaboration work, but then as idea explodes into new direction and doesnt fit with the collaboration work, the original one was scrapped off and put it away and reformed it into a new poem with new lines added. Dont want to waste the poem i have written, i shared now for all my valued readers_Soul, Unwritten Soul

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  • Bronze Star - 6,718 Points * Sunprincess * (8/29/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    ............dear soul, this is a fabulous poem with all the key ingredients of a masterpiece.....a flower with the sweet fragrance of perfume.....the beautiful soul garden of immortality....and a treasure of forever love to cherish always...loved reading this one....read it a few times.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 124 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/13/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    Hi. What's in immortality? I guess it would be boring to be immortal... Have you heard about the myth of Sibyl of Cumae?
    I saw with my own eyes the Sibyl at Cumae hanging in a cage, and when the boys said to her 'Sibyl, what do you want? ' that one replied 'I want to die'.

    If I were John Donne I would say you and your beloved should say goodbye to earthly love and then start a heavenly love in order to have an immortal love. But I am not Donne! hehe. Anyway people live with their beliefs. And they differ. No problem with it. Good Luck. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    Love thats immortal that lasts and lasts and lasts. Is found anywhere and
    everywhere. We may be apart but love will always remain in our heart. I invite
    you to read my poem More Than You'll Ever Know. A very inspiring write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (4/8/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    Eternal searching is really a great task but this poem shows that your soul is indeeed unwritten, nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/4/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    A work of art grandly created by an even grander soul!
    It is so easy to like what you choose to show the reader. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/17/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    The beautiful love exposed in this creditable poem of yours is really riveting! ! Thanks for not wasting the wonderful poem and sharing it with us.! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Diane Hine (2/17/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    'a treasure I buried in you, bowhere else but in you' - a touching thought in a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (2/13/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful...beautiful....i am enjoying it now in the tropical island of Mauritius. Again a big 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nader Baheri (2/12/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    fascinating soul.
    the garden of immortality.gaurdening the eternity.
    some thing penetrated to my mind while i was reading this poem.you know what:
    if we plant just a tree for every one we love we will have the green plant with fresh air.and those trees would be the signs of our loves and if some day we die they are going to continue their lives after us.and this would be the eternity.
    i have to confess although i had read some part of it before but it still for me new and fresh
    ~nb (Report) Reply

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