Anything To Be With You Poem by lil island Gal

Anything To Be With You

Rating: 4.8


Tomorrow is Too Far Away…
Let Me Give You My Heart Today
Love’s Language it has Just Learned To Say
It Will Belong To You in Joy and Sorrow
Till Time will get Tired to Flow.
Purity is symbolize as a White dove
Allow the sky to remember you of my love
I am becoming Repetitive
And This “I LOVE YOU” is not enough.
Time will have its way through
And God’s Eternity is the only
Limit of my love’s motive.
There are a lot of things
Without which I can existence achieve
But I want you to know
That I need only your smile to live
I would be anything without YOU
I would say anything to be with you
I would make anything to be with you
For you I would win, for you I would lose.
For you I would laugh, for you I would cry.
For you I would live, for you I would…..! ! ! ! .


P.S:
(i wish you could hear when i am saying)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 17 November 2008

A lot of desperation, in the wanting of love, in the poem

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

for u I could win --laugh --and live wow! ! ! ! great write l lovvvvvvvvvvit ++10 anju (do read and comment on some of mine)

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Jaideep Garg 18 November 2008

a nice poem mam...i really liked it.....

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Tissa Calvert 20 November 2008

this is a very heartfelt poem with alot of meaning towards how your love is for someone special keep it up '10'

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Richard Prosper 23 November 2008

This is a very good poem! It's very poignant in its meaning of that one love that everyone wants to find and keep with them. Keep up the great work! !

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Eyan Desir 07 April 2009

Nice compostion hehaha nice and sweet

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Catrina Heart 22 January 2009

a beautiful composition written with so much love and strong affection... the submission of one for the sake of so called love...great expression of poetic emotions...10

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Sameer Ahmed 01 January 2009

A very cordial and affectionate poem my dear..............You have acknowledged the original meaning of true love in a very splendid fashion..........Absolute 10.......

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Stephanie Saba 31 December 2008

written well. lovely poem.: ] God Bless.: ]

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Sherif Monem 26 December 2008

Very nicely WRITTEN AND FLOWS WITH EMOTIONS. Only line to be fixed is: Without which I can existence achieve! Thank you for having the chance to read your poem.

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