Anything Poem by Amy

Anything

Rating: 2.9


She ran out of the mist and into his arms
Hid from the hurt and out of the harm

I’d do anything babe
Anything

He held her tight and whispered into her ear
With all of his might, so all the world could hear

I’d do anything babe
Anything

He kissed her hand and caressed her cheek
Stood like a man, made her knees go weak

I’d do anything babe
Anything

He kept her safe, and cheered her mood
Stared into her face, and only saw good

I’d do anything babe
Anything

No longer did she love him, She no longer felt cheer
But he would never give in and his message was clear

I’d do anything babe
Anything


“I hate you” “I wish you were dead”
Her words were true, and a tear he did shed

I’d do anything babe
Anything

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

nice write with good repeatation to make readers to stay with the poem and in the end a twist....thanks 10++ for this courageous write rgds asif

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Little Hatila ;) 12 December 2008

sometimes doing anything for someone you love is not enough... very well done, keep going pretty girl....10 Hataw

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yea, i liked how you ended that, awesome.

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Scott Austin 18 December 2008

This is a wonderful piece that keeps the reader reading until the end…shocking…enjoyed the read. Scott

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

Anything unpredictable in any sense..a various aspect can happen..a depict between like and dislike write.... well expressed thoughts... Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

Amy's 'anything'...could be anything...many could guess...but only by end... this write brings out well the inside tussle for love and hate...well done, Amy...10

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Raindreamer Hippy 13 December 2008

Really touching. nice repition

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