Antipoet Poem by jerome moore

Antipoet

Rating: 5.0


and with a blast of silence
i experience all and nothing
and become further consciousness
a place where the chains of perception are lifted
and I am free out of mind and body
the walls are burning down around me
and I am nowhere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 24 August 2012

Good work, like the punctuation and the half phrase as a first line, good work.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 24 August 2012

Excellent the antipoetic ambiance. Unique the imagery to catch a special moment which could be the final moment of a life. Lucky the poet yet translating the time. Thanks for sharing....................................Pranab k c...........................10

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