Anticipation Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Anticipation Haiku

Rating: 5.0


The grape vine rises

then bends towards apple flowers

I wait to quench thirst

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tj Becker 21 September 2008

I love haiku form, what a challenge to write some thing amazing in so few words. You have done that well. You have captured nature and painted a picture for us. Well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

good imagery on passionate love, Lorraine...i liked 10

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

short and sweet....good

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 13 October 2008

Lorraine, A lovely haiku. I notice you don't follow the 5-7-5 rule..10 from me! Dorothy

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Lillian Thomas 15 August 2009

this is the best of your haiku I have read so far. keep it up.

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that gave the real taste of wine

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Reshma Ramesh 26 February 2009

superb write...........................

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

This is perfect.......just so nice. I liked it..............10

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Dorothy after I got your coment on y e-mail i went this haiku and recounted.it does follow the 5-7-5 syllable count.Thanks for the ten.

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